My story "Yearning For Metamorphosis" was critiqued at the Wordos last night. I already knew I wanted to take another pass at the end of the story, so besides those expected comments, the critique was favorable. I'll go over it line by line and take the story off on a slightly different direction for a better ending. I can't do much on it however. The Nexus group in Salem only meets every other week and the same story will be critiqued next Thursday, not tomorrow.


I'll be working on novel revision today. Perhaps I'll do another update later.