Ok, I've posted the first 5,000 words of my first chapter over on The Story Board which you can find the link over HERE, (Netter's page) because I'm an idiot and for some reason can't get the link to work correctly. If you wouldn't mind going over and reading it, then leaving some feedback, I'd really appreciate it!

And if you're not a member and you would be willing to do crits, let me know and I can e-mail the attachment to you.

Thanks all!