Debby: I'm teaching my students how to give feedback on another student's paper that is specific but doesn't hurt the person's feelings.

David: You could say, "This sentence is really good; you could do more like this."

Debby: Yes, David. That is exactly what you could do.

Debby (on the phone to my sister): If she's having trouble understanding theme, you could tell her it's the underlying idea or belief and then give her some examples like "Love conquers all" or "Technology is dangerous."

David: or every expert was once a beginner.

Debby: Yes, David. That is a great possible theme.

David (after listening to some of Treasure Island): Peter Duck is based on Treasure Island. They are the same story.

Debby: David I believe you. I just haven't read either story.