...find an ending to Bain's Thoughts, a 1100 worder that is really cool (until the fucking ending). there is an ending to it right now but its as lame as hell.

used to be, when I was stuck, I would think all day and night of the story and eventually come up with something I like. I kinda dont do that now, and thats prolly the problem. I forget about it during the day and think of other stuff. plus, I aint writing every day so it might be 3 or 4 days before I even think of it.

I do wanna finish this story, tho, cuz I had so much fun writing it. heres a wee dab of whats up:


He’d said, in a short November sixteenth posting, that a train will wreck at ten times the speed of sound. His wording was far more dramatic; his use of Roman numerals added a gothic feel:

At speed X
Maybe faster
The loco Queen will end
Colliding within

The next day, in Queensland, Australia, a train did indeed wreck. There were injuries but no fatalities. Alongside that, in science news that day, the U.S. Air Force scored a new personal best with a plane that hit mach ten in controlled experiments.

The line about colliding within, although meaningless, was just too cool to change.




this portion--which is actual events--is gone cuz its from '04 or 5, and I decided to make everythinbg '08...so its just usless, but it is what the story is like.
.............

tired.

roofed today and my stuff hurts. gonna hit the chiar with The Dead Zone and relax until sleepytime...

night all :)